Critique 1 (find a short story with a number in the title) : Ward 6
Critique 2 (find a short story with jewellery and or a gem in the title): The Locket
Critique 3 (Find a short story with a size in the title): The discovery Of The High Lama
Critique 4(Find a short story with travel or movement in the title):When Sara Looks Up
Critique 5(Find a short story with evil in the title): John Mortenson's Funeral
Critique 6(Find a short story with a life stage in the title): Desirees Baby
The Locket
Young Edmund merely 16 years had been forced to go over seas to fight a war that was not his. Leaving his fair not yet married maiden behind with only a locket to remember her. 4 years passed and not a scratch came to Edmund throughout the war, his pals believed it was luck but Edmund knew it was something deeper, he knew it was the locket he held so dearly it had saved him, Alas the day he would encounter his fair maiden once more to propose to her, didn't happen he stepped on a mine and died a tragicful death. To this day Octavia will never forget her almost husband, Edmund. She won't forget his distressed dead body and the locket he carried around his neck.
I would rate this story 4 out of 5 stars because it was well written and a lot happened throughout but i felt the end was missing something and that the story was difficult to follow.
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